Tuesday, March 10, 2009
Brad and Janet's Excellent Adventure
As midnight approached, Janet and Brad heeded cautiously towards the darkened desolate mansion to escape the relentless storm. Their brand new car skid across a patch of ice and smashed into a monsterous oak tree on the road nearby. The night was haunting, and Brad's eyes fixed on the shadows with suspicion, trying to decipher any sudden movements of danger as he grasped Janets waist protectively. As they timidly made their way up the moss covered steps to the colossal spider infested door, the wind whailed and was filled with distant howls that had no creator. Janet rapped on the door, and moments later, it opened to reveal the derranged scientist, with a wrinkled pale face that shown dismay at their arrival. Brad and Janet glanced at eachother in terror, and bolted down the steps and down the long winding road. When Janet finally reached the car again, drenched and out of breath, she turned around, then realizing that it was no longer Brad who was behind her.
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Excellent writing, Heather. I also included my Brad and Janet piece in my portfolio, so I was excited to read what you did with yours.
ReplyDeleteI love the line about the "colossal spider infested door"