Introduction To Piece One

The piece of writing that I best took through the writing process is my argument paper, Overreaction on Child Safety. I wrote this piece the first week of March, the assignment being an essay that persuades the reader to side with my opinion on a particular situation. My opinion was that the “toxic toys” bill that is in effect in Washington State is illogical and needs revision. My writing was strong because I explained reasons of why the bill was illogical, for example, that new toys have to comply with the new safety standards but second hand stores do not have to comply. I also had done a lot of research on the bill and presented them in my paper in a well thought out matter. The reason that I was so interested and concerned about the bill coming into effect was because I recently had worked at a small toy store so I have had a lot of insight on how many people feel about the new bill, as well as formed my own opinion about it.